This is Matthew's work on the question of representation of gender in the extract we watched and partly re-created.
This would score highly on Argument / Analysis as he makes many pertinent points and demonstrates his understanding of the producers' intentions (and the macro-level).
However, it doesn't score much in terms of examples as there are too few specific examples of analysis of the 4 key areas (micro-elements): camerawork, mise-en-scene, editing and soundtrack.
tv drama Ashes to Ashes0001
The script below scored 36 marks out of 50. It also deals with the representation of gender. Examiner's comments at the top.
G322 June 2010 section A only
This second one scored 48 marks out of 50. ESSENTIAL READING!
G322 June 2010 98 marks
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